DannyBoyy 175 Posted May 17, 2015 Hey everyone! If i could have 10 mins of your time to check out this short story and any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Enjoy :) 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
wooly-back-jack 294 Posted May 17, 2015 cried as much as watership down 10/10 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DannyBoyy 175 Posted May 17, 2015 cried as much as watership down 10/10 thank you so much! means a lot :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
therandomredstone 432 Posted May 17, 2015 At 8:36, whenever you shot yourself, you could've had a sudden black screen for two or so seconds before fading into the next scene on the coast. Just a thought. LOVLEY short clip! I enjoyed it! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DannyBoyy 175 Posted May 17, 2015 At 8:36, whenever you shot yourself, you could've had a sudden black screen for two or so seconds before fading into the next scene on the coast. Just a thought. LOVLEY short clip! I enjoyed it! Ah! i played with that and had that in the edit, after watching each ending a number of times i just felt the quick flash into the next scene worked better ^^ but, your probably right :) Glag you liked it! just felt like doing something differant for a change :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thewire 88 Posted May 17, 2015 (edited) good..very niceyou should incorporated the 28 weeks later opening scene music score into your movie sort of building the suspense before you off yourself Edited May 17, 2015 by thewire 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DannyBoyy 175 Posted May 17, 2015 good..very niceyou should incorporated the 28 weeks later opening scene music score into your movie sort of building the suspense before you off yourself hmm nows theres an idea! i'll keep an open mind for the next vid? if there is to be a next vid hehe glad you like it! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
liquidcactus 719 Posted May 18, 2015 good..very niceyou should incorporated the 28 weeks later opening scene music score into your movie Naaa, i think that music is used way too much on any zombie related youtube vid.. well done on the video tho :D 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DannyBoyy 175 Posted May 19, 2015 Naaa, i think that music is used way too much on any zombie related youtube vid.. well done on the video tho :D Thank you! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
