What do you think about my promotion video

[TuranArek 61]

Recently i made a promotion video and I was wondering what your reaction is.

If you can give any constructive criticism or anything I can do improve it would be appreciated.

 

Thank you for the effort :D
  Edited December 1, 2014 by TuranArek

[Steak and Potatoes 13480]

Needs moar music and the camera in and out makes my eyes hurt :/.

Edited December 1, 2014 by Steak and Potatoes

[ScorePoint 60]

I'd make the music a bit louder. The text is hard to see. I like the game play footage and voices are very good and clear.

[Conrad_The_Comrade 577]

Nice effort, but I'd refrain from using the term "Friends" in a group like this, because rivalries do show up amongst people, even if they share a common goal/name. Find something more official, as to not mislead newcomers into thinking it's going to all be laughs and giggles (Not literally, just meaning friendly) between players. :)

[Act III 50]

Comic Sans MS is all I can say.

[Count_Grishnackh 65]

^ +1

Was gonna say this... the only time anyone should use comic sans is NEVER ... or in ... I dont know... a comic

Edited December 2, 2014 by Count_Grishnackh