Chernarus, a beginning

[vbsarge 10]

I actually wrote this quite a while ago, and it has just sat around not being read by anyone.  

 

Feedback is much appreciated.

 

approx 95 pages, with an alternate ending.

Chernarus.pdf

Edited September 4, 2013 by vbsarge

[DemonGroover 8836]

Hey there.

 

Ive read about the first 10 pages.  Good job. 

 

I'll try and read more later.

[vbsarge 10]

I'd like to write some more, maybe not on this topic, but in general, but I need some feedback, positive or negative, to give me some motivation.

 

I hope you all enjoy reading it.

[callsignBravo (DayZ) 323]

cannot get enough im around page 70 bullet just got taken and im pissed i stopped to write this. Bye back to reading!

[NagsterTheGangster 388]

I dont have the time to read such a story, but i respect that you've taken so much time and effort into it, props.

[Kerbo 198]

This was a good story and I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing.