My first firefight

[NicoBaloira1357 24]

So, I just had the most intense moment of my whole gaming life, it all started a few dayz ago, I spawned near berezino, so I go and loot the town, pretty successful run, I got out of berezino with a backpack, hunter pants, a couple cans of food, some pipsi, a, couple cans of spite, and a mosin, no bullets, so I go out into the wilderness headed to krasnostav, my main goal was to get to NEAF, so I get to krasnostav, had to beat a couple zombies to death until I found a fireaxe, I was golden right? mosin and the best melee weapon, still, no bullets, I head up to the mountain north of krasnostav to have some cover on my way into the airfield, had to go eat so I disconnect.

 

I go back on today, and head right into the airfield, on the prison I find a guy with an m4, defenseless I call out "friendly, please don't shoot"  he says, "don't worry dude, I'm friendly" and asks me if I need anything, he was kind enough to give me some bullets for my mosin, great, now I have means of defense, then, another guy comes out and says he's also friendly on the mic, so both of us calm down, so I go and loot the radio tower and find some m4 bullets, I think I might as well repay the favor and give him some ammo for his gun, on my way back to the prison I hear some shots, since everyone there was seemingly friendly, I thought they might be shooting zombies, silly me, as I get there I say on the mic "dude, I found some m4 bullets if you want them" only to find him laying on the stairs dead, I heard some footsteps upstairs so I immediately knew he would be on the corner behind the stairs waiting for me to go up, so I go up really careful, knowing that I had a long range, weapon, and he had an automatic rifle, and the upper hand in the battle, so all odds went against me.

 

So as I go up the stairs to find him sitting where I knew he was, so I shoot at him, but I miss, I go back down for cover as I put another round into the chamber, and I go back up, this time much slower, as soon as I see his forehead I take my second shot, this time hitting him right in the head, I though to myself now I'm safe, but I wasn't, I look out the window and see 2 of his friends coming for me, he thought I was injured I guess since he took a couple of shots at me, but he didn't hit once, bad aim I guess, so I hold my position with my mosin right at the door aiming for the head as I didn't want to damage the gear they had, first shot, first kill, I miss 2 shots at the other dude, but I end up getting him, ended up with 2 revolvers 2 pnx.45 and a lot of food and a sniper scope for my mosin, I have never been so stressed out on a game, my heart raised as if I was running, I finally get why so many people love this game, I liked it before, but I had never had such an intense moment (I bought the alpha at launch, so don't think I've been a year without firefights, but I haven't played too much)

Edited January 31, 2014 by NicoBaloira1357

[Ghostflux 100]

Please use punctuation, so it's actually readable. Thank you.

[applejaxc 2500]

So that was a long story, right? And you can split up paragraphs, right? And run on sentences are pretty annoying, right? And no one likes rhetorical questions, right?

[frosti 2165]

Cool story bro

[NicoBaloira1357 24]

Please use punctuation, so it's actually readable. Thank you.

 

So that was a long story, right? And you can split up paragraphs, right? And run on sentences are pretty annoying, right? And no one likes rhetorical questions, right?

Sorry about that I guess, I'm not much of a writer.

 

But you could've just skipped the wall fo text if you didn't liked it tho

[applejaxc 2500]

But you could've just skipped the wall fo text if you didn't liked it tho

But then I wouldn't have any mean things to say. :(

[NicoBaloira1357 24]

Please use punctuation, so it's actually readable. Thank you.

 

But then I wouldn't have any mean things to say. :(

 

Better now?

[ChiefMasterKush 321]

Better now?

Ya if you're going to write a wall of text, gotta make it readable.  Plus it's good to know how to read and write.

 

Re-read what you are posting before you post that way you can fix the errors you made.  Everyone makes them but if you don't re-read and edit accordingly you get comments like the ones above.

 

 

:beans: Welcome to DayZ  :beans:

 

This is why we play, long moments of boredom followed by a few seconds of excitement.

Edited January 31, 2014 by ChiefMasterKush

[creature 1189]

Dude, I think someone switched the , and . keys on your keyboard. Just sayin'.

[NicoBaloira1357 24]

Ya if you're going to write a wall of text, gotta make it readable.  Plus it's good to know how to read and write.

 

Re-read what you are posting before you post that way you can fix the errors you made.  Everyone makes them but if you don't re-read and edit accordingly you get comments like the ones above.

 

 

:beans: Welcome to DayZ  :beans:

 

This is why we play, long moments of boredom followed by a few seconds of excitement.

I usually re-read my stuff, because english is my second language, but since it is my second language I don't notice most errors, I do notice most orthographic errors but not so much when it comes to paragraph structure and stuff like that

[GoldenKade 73]

I love the story, reminds me of many a times in Elektro, NWAF, Cherno, Zeleno, Krasno, NEAF, Rify and etc.

Also don't mind the grammar Nazis, especially if English is your second language.