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Hello there

 

Heres one ive started, but its not right.

 

Advice? Ideas?

 

Rgds

 

LoK

 

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Great!

Add a shotgun on the horse?

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i love it, however my only niggle is the character in the foreground is too sharp compared to his backing... it does look like he's kinda been stuck there with glue.

maybe attempt to soften his edges down a little, bar that i like where this is going. 

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Nice orlok, would say that the perspective seems to be a bit off, followong the flow of the grass the horse seems to be a bit too high, 8inchs or so and the female seems way too high(thats assuming she's kneeling not standing with one leg up, maybe adding a bit of foreground grass would fool the eye a bit

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Hello there

 

The DOF is way off, ill fix that. agreed on the perspective.

 

Does need mor guns and kit on horsey.

 

 

hmmmm

 

stuff to think about tyvm

 

Rgds

 

LoK

 

also, belt looks crap imho!

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Hello there

 

The DOF is way off, ill fix that. agreed on the perspective.

 

Does need mor guns and kit on horsey.

 

 

hmmmm

 

stuff to think about tyvm

 

Rgds

 

LoK

 

also, belt looks crap imho!

What do you think about adding more clues about man it is or woman?  ;)

belt needs fix size ofc

and not bad pic by the way =)

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But seriously, it looks pretty good what are you using it for. 

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