FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 23, 2013 Just a short trailer I made for DayZ. Please tell me what to improve on, i'm not the best with ideas :PSo just tell me what you think :D 7 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Testwd3r235 2810 Posted June 23, 2013 Just a short trailer I made for DayZ. Please tell me what to improve on, i'm not the best with ideas :PSo just tell me what you think :DI liked the video but the song needs a change. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 23, 2013 Ok Macabre, thanks for the feedback. Any suggestions on songs, i'm a bad song picker :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Testwd3r235 2810 Posted June 23, 2013 Ok Macabre, thanks for the feedback. Any suggestions on songs, i'm a bad song picker :PNot really but experimenting is the key, I guess the idea would be to try dubbing over several to the muted video and seeing what fits. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tophercook (DayZ) 22 Posted June 23, 2013 Great Job! I personally think the song fits! not what I like in my personal life for music, but I liked it for the trailer.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 23, 2013 Great Job! I personally think the song fits! not what I like in my personal life for music, but I liked it for the trailer..Thanks man :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blondedash 403 Posted June 23, 2013 i loved the blurriness around the edges effect most. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fuzzy mcdoodle 5 Posted June 24, 2013 Holy Magic Bullet Looks and Twitch!Poor song choice, cuts were too quick, color grading was bad, titles were poor. Could use some work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 25, 2013 Thanks for all the feedback guys, yeah the song isn't the best but its the only one that could fit the trailer to how I wanted it. I'll make more and work on the suggestions you gave me :3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Inception. 9443 Posted June 25, 2013 'Tis excellent; I found the lighting to be rather appropriate. I also really liked the outro of the "DayZ" word. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BSB Jimmy 360 Posted June 25, 2013 'Tis excellent; I found the lighting to be rather appropriate. I also really liked the outro of the "DayZ" word.i'm pretty sure that was stolen from someone else but still nice video anyway. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Inception. 9443 Posted June 25, 2013 (edited) i'm pretty sure that was stolen from someone else but still nice video anyway.Where have you seen it before?Oh, OP here credited the creator in the description. Edited June 25, 2013 by Inception. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 25, 2013 i'm pretty sure that was stolen from someone else but still nice video anyway.Not stolen, I gave credit to the creator in the description and his channel name. Go check him out http://www.youtube.com/user/arneoog Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FPSNige (DayZ) 0 Posted June 25, 2013 Not available on mobiles:mellow: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 25, 2013 Not available on mobiles:mellow:Sowwie :( I tried to fix that but it wouldn't let me, I think it might be because of the copyrighted music. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cookedzombie 3 Posted June 25, 2013 Just a short trailer I made for DayZ. Please tell me what to improve on, i'm not the best with ideas :PSo just tell me what you think :DGreat editing. Love it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 25, 2013 Great editing. Love it.Thanks :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Creep- 569 Posted June 25, 2013 I liked the song, could do with a short clip of a long range shot, perhaps end the song and video with a headshot, in game sounds only. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 26, 2013 Holy Magic Bullet Looks and Twitch!Poor song choice, cuts were too quick, color grading was bad, titles were poor. Could use some work.Yeah the song wasn't that good, and the cut scenes were meant to be quick, that was the idea. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nnuu 61 Posted June 26, 2013 Really wanted to watch this but not available on mobile. Oh well. Might want to look into royalty free music Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted June 28, 2013 Really wanted to watch this but not available on mobile. Oh well. Might want to look into royalty free musicThe songs that I've found on royalty free music don't really match up to the plan of the video. I'll keep looking for my next project. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
leviski 2152 Posted June 28, 2013 Rage is that you? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Death_Dealer 3155 Posted June 28, 2013 (edited) Pick a spooky or eerie song. The song you picked I felt really made DayZ look like a totally different game. Edited June 28, 2013 by Death Dealer Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostyDeath 8 Posted July 5, 2013 Pick a spooky or eerie song. The song you picked I felt really made DayZ look like a totally different game. Yeah i'll try and add a better song on my next project (And sorry for late replys, been playing a lot of DayZ recently :P) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
