DayZ Crafting Rope

[Surviv0r1969 151]

[BeefBacon 1185]

If you're going to make very short videos that are tutorials or are showcasing a weapon or feature, it might be best to cut down on the intro. 18 seconds of content in a 52 second video. It's nitpicky, sure, but when most of the video is "please subscribe" it gives a bad impression - even if its at the end.

 

The intro is also slightly misleading. You describe an adventure in DayZ and then show how to craft rope. You should maybe preface longer videos with "here's an adventure" and shorter videos with "here's now to do X". People will subscribe if they want to, and they know what subscribing does. You don't have to tell them what subscribing will do for them. You'd be better off having a screen at the end with links to other videos you've done, along with the logos for Twitch, Twitter, Reddit, etc along with 'links in the description'. Copying and pasting the address bar into the video looks sloppy, but is fine for the description.

 

You could even hold off on making more of these tutorial/showcase videos and then make a longer video that shows some of the new stuff you can do in DayZ rather than only covering one topic at a time.

 

Besides the presentation, it was fine. Could maybe speak up a bit as you tend to mumble a wee bit (might be your mic, mind). The actual meat of the video was clear and concise, which is good when giving tutorials.

[Surviv0r1969 151]

thing is alot of people might only want to see how to say make rope and dont want to sit through lots of tutorials in one go to see the one thing they want. catch 22 situation really

[BeefBacon 1185]

thing is alot of people might only want to see how to say make rope and dont want to sit through lots of tutorials in one go to see the one thing they want. catch 22 situation really

 

That's true. Still, I hope the rest of my ramble was helpful.