My Story About Betrayal ( Sorry For A Bad Grammar )

[Sateph 0]

So After I Do Suicide Because I Just Had A Broken Beacause Of The Glitched Door , I Met A Random Guy . He Was Running Way Towards Elektro . So I Told Him " Hey ! I Am Friendly " I Think He Didn't Notice The Massage . So After A While After Following Him ( I Myself Don't Even Know Why I Do That ) He Noticed Me . He Stopped And Asked Me " Where Are You Heading Man ? " And I Said That I Just Following Him . After That , We Ran Together And Met Another Guy . After That , We Decided To Go To Belota Air Field . On The Way , He Asked Me " Have You Ever Killed A Guy Before ? " I Said No Because I Am Trying To Be As Friendly As Possible ( I Didn't Suspect Him ) . So After A While He Said Let's Go Inside The Hospital Because The Zombies Were Chasing Us . So On The Way To The Roof Top He And The Other Guy Found A Gun . When We Arrived At The Rooftop , One Of Them Closed The Door And One Of Them Went Behind Me And Shot Me In The Leg . I Was Super Shocked . As I Was Very Near To Edge I Decided To Roll To Edge And Kill My Self . I Heard He Said Something After I Died . " Welcome To Dayz "

Edited April 20, 2014 by Sateph

[Scofflaw 73]

I can't read that.

[Sateph 0]

I can't read that.

Is It Bad Grammar Or The Way I Capitalise Every Words ?

[IamDinner 28]

So After I Do Suicide Because I Just Had A Broken Beacause Of The Glitched Door , I Met A Random Guy . He Was Running Way Towards Elektro . So I Told Him " Hey ! I Am Friendly " I Think He Didn't Notice The Massage . So After A While After Following Him ( I Myself Don't Even Know Why I Do That ) He Noticed Me . He Stopped And Asked Me " Where Are You Heading Man ? " And I Said That I Just Following Him . After That , We Ran Together And Met Another Guy . After That , We Decided To Go To Belota Air Field . On The Way , He Asked Me " Have You Ever Killed A Guy Before ? " I Said No Because I Am Trying To Be As Friendly As Possible ( I Didn't Suspect Him ) . So After A While He Said Let's Go Inside The Hospital Because The Zombies Were Chasing Us . So On The Way To The Roof Top He And The Other Guy Found A Gun . When We Arrived At The Rooftop , One Of Them Closed The Door And One Of Them Went Behind Me And Shot Me In The Leg . I Was Super Shocked . As I Was Very Near To Edge I Decided To Roll To Edge And Kill My Self . I Heard He Said Something After I Died . " Welcome To Dayz "

 

Another fine day in DAYz. Learning the hard way is really the way to learn the best lessons.

 

Don't add a space before puncuation and only one after. Makes it hard to even look at and you might consider not using walls of text.

 

Your grammer is mostly fine it is just the formatting that makes it hard to read. watch those tenses... :)

[IamDinner 28]

Is It Bad Grammar Or The Way I Capitalise Every Words ?

 

If you are doing it on purpose just to be annoying I would ask that a mod lock this thread.

[Sateph 0]

If you are doing it on purpose just to be annoying I would ask that a mod lock this thread.

No Man , It's My Way Of Typing Sorry If It Annoys You

[Scofflaw 73]

Is It Bad Grammar Or The Way I Capitalise Every Words ?

 

Yes.

[Ubernaut 297]

No Man , It's My Way Of Typing Sorry If It Annoys You

 

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Edited April 20, 2014 by Ubernaut

[hannibaldaplaya 1095]

i gET tHAT aLL tHE tIME. yOU hAVE mY cONDOLENCES, sIR.

 

pEOPLE sHOULD uNDERSTAND tHAT oUR wAY oF tYPING mAKES uS sPECIAL.

 

PPL DunT uNDRstNd THt We HVE OuR waYSSS tO TyPINVS