So I just killed 2 bandit snipers killing fresh spawns in Elektro

[TheWizard14 372]

So I was running down to Cherno with my M24 and M4A3 CCO. I was hidding in the back forest looking to counter snipe some bandits but Cherno seemed pretty dead as I didn't see any bandits to kill after 30 minutes. Just tons of fresh spawn survivors running around with zombies on them.

 

So seeing that it is dead, I go run across the back forest all the way to Elektro to see if there are some bandits running around elektro to kill. Well as I'm on the counter sniper hill just eyeing the main sniper hill, I hear dozens of sniper shots coming out to my right side (left side of elektro), near the bushes. So I'm crouching jogging over there and I hear a pop near me so I hide, thinking they saw me. But nothing else happened so I thought maybe it was just a random bullet I heard. So I continue making my way towards where i hear the sniper shots and then I see him.

 

I see the camo clothing bandit sniper just prone rolling in the bushes looking for targets. Then he just starts looking my way and all around him doing a 360 many times. So I am hiding behind a tree where I can see him and I'm wondering if that is the only sniper or if someone else is around.

 

So I'm just sitting here looking at him when all of a sudden some bambi survivor runs up behind me and takes my M4 out of my back pack which results in me killing him because he was probably going to shoot me (sorry mr survivor). Well the sniper who I was watching obviously heard the shots since I was 10 meters away and started looking in my direction. While that happened another camo clothing guy came out of the bushes and shot the sniper who was looking at me, then HE started looking in my direction. 

 

        After a few moments of both of us glances back and forth, while he is prone just aiming right at me, I get my sights on his head and peak the side of the tree. I head shot him and both elektro snipers are down. I check all of their gear and they had a M14, M40A3, and DMR with plenty of mags, bags, and food to survive for a long time. 

 

Mission: Counter Snipe Snipers - Complete.

[oldfossil 59]

Nice story!

[TheWizard14 372]

Nice story!

 

Thank you.

[Korsbaek 1778]

Great story, but you actually only killed one bandit and a survivor.

[Barack Obama 215]

That was a good story.

 

However, I would respectfully like to make some constructive criticism:

1)  When you are explaining relative location, try to avoid using words like "left/right".  Instead, use compass bearings or 1 to 12 o'clock situational directions.

2)  It's confusing for the reader when you are switching between present-tense and past-tense (especially in the same sentence).  For example:

So I'm just sitting here looking at him when all of a sudden some bambi survivor runs up behind me and takes my M4 out of my back pack which results in me killing him because he was probably going to shoot me.

 

Past-tense:  "So, I just sat there looking at him when all of a sudden some bambi survivor ran up behind me and took my M4 out of my back pack which resulted in me killing him because he probably would've shot me".

 

Present-tense:  "So, I'm just sitting here looking at him when all of a sudden some bambi survivor runs up behind me and takes my M4 out of my back pack which results in me killing him because he was probably going to shoot me".

 

Edit:  I'm sorry for being a grammar Nazi.  Just letting you know for your own benefit.  xoxo. ;)

Edited September 14, 2013 by Barack Obama

[oldfossil 59]

Thanks a lot to you Mr President for this useful grammar lesson. I have learned some more about english language. I hope to learn even more in the future about it.

[Dagwood 680]

Would have been more badass if you hadn't used 3rd person to line up your shot