This Is My 1st Ever Story Im Making Based On Dayz

[Lehfeels 12]

The Story Of Richard Fernardo - Army Soldier In Training  In  The Place Where Dayz Takes Place  2 Days Before Zombie Outbreak

Chapter1-The Outbreak Begins

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Me And The Other Soldiers Going Through Basic Training  Have Heard Screams In Are Sleeping Quarters We Had Walked In With Are Makarovs We Used To Train We Saw The Wardens Corpse And It Seems He Had Been Attacked By A Animal But It Wasent These Bitemarks Were Human  He Was Dead We Had Seen A FIgure Of A Human Appear He Walked Out And Ran At Us  We Were So Confused Private  Reznov Had Got Bited We Had Shot The Pale Human We Were Confused Why He Would Attack Us Just Then A Horde Of Those Pale Humans Have Rushed Are Camp We Shot As Many As Possible Then Quickly Went Through The Tents Grabbed Wat Stuff We Could Before We  Left We Stuffed All The Supplies We Found In Are Backpacks We Had Those Pale Creatures On Are Tail Just Then PRivate victor Tossed A Grenade And Blew Them Up Then He Said For Mother Russia Then We Killed The Weird Pale Mutants By Finishing Them With A Shot To The Heads With Are Makarov We Quickly Run Behind A Grove Of Thick Brush And Trees And Opened Are Backpacks To See Wat We Got To Work With We Got 5 Makarov Mags  2 Ak-74s 3 grenades 1 Satchel Charge And About 2 Guillie Suits And 4 Water  Bottles And Lots Of Bandaids And Lots Of Pepsi And  Canned food And 1 Nvg And 2 Ak-74 mags Now We Set Out To Find Shelter Lets Hope We Find Shelter Before We Become A Zombies  Food-----------------------------------------------------------------

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Chapter2-Shelter Has Been found-

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We Have Been  Wondering Around The Forest For 2 Days And Suddenly We See A Barn In Tact The Barn Had A Double Barrel Shotgun And Some Shells And A Hatchet We Took Them And Started Searching 2nd Floor For Sandbag And Barbed Wire To Secure The Barn When  Private Reznov Turned Into 1 Of Those Things I Quickly Pulled Out My Ak And Blew The Now Mutated Reznov Away We Were All In Shock Me And Private  Victor Were  So Shocked Not Noticing That He Had A Bite Up Until Now We Found Some Barbed Wire On 2nd Floor Of Barn  We We Barbwired Off 1 Of The Entrances And We Also Found Some  Steel Plates We  Found Also A Welder For Welding Stuff We Welded The Steel Plates On Windows In Barn And Made A Steel Plate Door With Heavy Impact Protection From Mutants  We Knew We Would Have To Goto Nearest Town For Supplies Since We Had Most Of Canned Food And Water And Soda Ate And Drank Up Which That Towns Name Is Electro We Set Out Tommorow Morning To Scavenge For Wat We Can Get Out Of Electro---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Chapter3- The Electro Supply Run

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We Load Up Double Barrel Shotgun And Are Aks And Set Out For Electro We Know This Walk To Electro Would Be About 3 Mile Hike So We Would Search A Old Military Outpost A Mile From Here Once We Reached The Outpost We Found  A Military Jeep Kind Of Vehicle  We Had Tried To Start It Up But We Have Just Learned It Needs New Engine Which In The Military Post Is A Repair Shop We Are Going Towards It To Find Out If They Got A Engine Which Were In Luck They Have 1 Engine Lets Hope This Works Out  We Replaced The Engine And It Runs Great Now Were In Luck That The Keys Were In The Car Ignition Now Off We Go To Electro Ok Now That We Are  Near There We Will Stop Car By This Old FarmHouse We Found To Loot It We Hope No Mutants In There Were In Luck Road Flares We Found And 2 BloodBags And 1 Antibiotic That's Good Find Now Time TO Head To Electro In Are Recent Found Military Jeep We Are Now In Electro Were Going To Search Entire Town Ok We Have Searched Entire Town  Victor Got Shot In Leg By Bandit We Found 1 Gun 1 Crowbar A Whole Ton Of Bandages  And Some Blood Bags A Few Mags For Are Aks And reznov We Patched Up Who Is In Good Health Now We Patched Him Up Were Going To Camp Out In The Electro Hospital--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------\

Chapter4-  Time To Leave

We Awoke In Electro Hospital Got Up Loaded Are Aks And Drank Some Soda And Ate Some Canned Beans And Pasta

And Victor Said Before We Go We Should Search Military Outposts For SandBags Ammo  And Barbed Wire To Secure Are base We Search Outposts Find Tons Of Sandbags Barbed wire And Tons Of Ammo And Flares  We Go Out Of Outposts And Go Towards Are Jeep To Get Out Of Here BACK To Base And All Of A Sudden We Hear A Male Voice Say "DROP UR WEAPONS OR DIE" We Say Ok And Quickly Turn Around Knock Bandit Backwards And Run For Cover Behind The Jeep  Victor Goes Up To Shoot Him And Gets Shot In Hand I Pull Up With My Ak And When He Sticks His Head Up I Unload My Entire Mag On Him  We Walk Up To Him He Says U Will Pay My Clan Will Come After U Then He Died He Had A Alice Pack I Let Victor Use It  He Had Inside Alice Pack Tons Ammo Food Soda  And Some Morphine And BloodBags Now We Get In Car I Drive And Go Home----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Chapter5-Home Sweet Home :)

We Have Arrived To Home Sweet Home We Here Someone Inside Are Barn Base We Say FREEZE He Says Woah Woah Im Just A Survivor We Lower Are Guns And Say U Cant Stay Here Sorry But We Can Give U Supplies And Send U On Ur Way He Agrees And We Send Him Away With Some Food Water And A Crowbar

Then We Get  Those Sandbags And Barbed Wire Set Up By  Other Entrance And We Put A Steel Plate We Found In   Car Garage  On Barn Top Window And Made It Open And Close Then We Heard A Car Outside It Was A Whole Pile Of Bandits We Heard About We Thought Fast And Tossed A Grenade Killed about 8 of 9 1 Ran We Sniped Him Thx U Grenade Next Step Is Form A Colony :D----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Chapter6-Cherno Here We Come-

 

We Are Set For Another Town Trip Victor Has Said There Maybe Be A Alive Repairman Who Could Armor Up Are Vehicle A Bit Ok I Said Lets Go We Hopped In Are Jeep To Cherno  Headed Up Cherno And Saw A Blockage Like People Were Trying To Keep Those Mutants Out But It Seems Someone Must Have Been Bite And Infected Everyone Inside The Blockage  It Says  InfectionFree-Zone Yeah Right We Park Car Outside Blockage Walk In Past Blockage After Awhile Of Walking We Find The Garage We See The Repairman Hes Alive We Asked Him Can Ya Armor Up Are Car He Says Sure ill Try My Best  We Go Get Car And Drive And Break Through The Blockage The  Repairman Armors It Up For A Couple Hours Then We Say Thanks And We Offer Him Some Shelter To Come Live With Us He Agrees We All Get In  Are Jeep And Drive Me Victor And Repairman Home To Home Sweet Home  But Car Stops Were Out Of Gas Theres A Gas Station  Right Next To Were We Ran Out Of Gas Just Then I Quickly Dodge Bullets Steady Bullet And Shoot I Think I Hit Him I Run In And My Bullet Killed The Man He Was Just Another Survivor Thinking We Were Bandits In Guilt  I Bury Him After Searching For Fuel Tank I Found A Fuel Canister In The Back Room Of Gas Station  And Then Here Comes The Hard Part I Had To Look For The Generator To Turn On The Pumps I Went In The Basement And There was  A Giant New Type Of Zombie That Was Puking AT Me A Aimed With My 1911 Pistol And Unloaded On Him He Fell Over Dead I Turned On Generator Went Back Up Got The Gas And Me Victor And Are New  Survivor We Rescued Repairman Frank Traveled To Are Base In  Are  Jeep Which Is Now Armored

Edited August 21, 2013 by DayzBanditoBeans

[triage 117]

The "Grammar Nazis" are approaching. 

Edited August 17, 2013 by Iownzyou

[TastyBagel 45]

Quick question; why on earth did you capatalize EVERY WORD?!?

 

Edit: Here come the (grammatically correct) hordes!!!

Edited August 17, 2013 by TastyBagel

[Lehfeels 12]

Idk Just My Way Of Doing Things :)

[duong0111 9]

Why do you have to capitalize every single bloody word?

 

[The Friendly Bandit 137]

They look like great stories, but the caps and the lack of punctuation make it difficult to read.

 

Regardless, they were good stories :)

[shadow ghoul 17]

Grammar Nazi reporting. English teachers exist for a reason; they actually make things possible to read.

[Lehfeels 12]

im sorry DayzBeanBandito Aint Here A grammar Nazi has taken over him

[Dagwood 680]

Computer games are lobotomizing the youth of the world. The future looks bleak

[Lehfeels 12]

Im Not In The Youth Section Of The Age Levels I Just Play It Once In Awhile Not Making It My Life

[Lehfeels 12]

But Video Games Make Most Youths Not Go Outside And Play Outside Becuz Computers Have Mind Control Juice  In Them To Confuse  Kiddys  Brains

[Dagwood 680]

It also keeps them from picking up a book and learning proper syntax and basic writing skills

[plexico 386]

It looked like a good story.. till I saw every letter was capitalized. You shouldn't really do that.

[mikey416hr 0]

Hey bro do you want me to help you out with this story? I mean this seems like a good idea... but I dont think the way you've written it will appeal to the grammar nazis :p

Edited August 19, 2013 by JKILLA252

[Lehfeels 12]

Well Jkilla U Can Gimme Some Ideas For The Story

[Lehfeels 12]

Hey bro do you want me to help you out with this story? I mean this seems like a good idea... but I dont think the way you've written it will appeal to the grammar nazis :P

Also Jkilla  Wanna Team In Dayz?

[The Aquatic Land Walrus 565]

No offense, but this grammar hurt my eyes.

Nice story though. <3