FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 18, 2013 Hello buddies! I am FortressDarkness, and this is my second DayZ cinematic machinima I did. It's a short segment of a story of a bambi who should have never entered the dangerous grounds of Elektrozavodsk.. Enjoy, and please tell me what you think! Leave a subscription too if you think it's nice, I'll be making more films soon! :) 7 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
beatSTV 631 Posted February 18, 2013 that was nice mate really really nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 18, 2013 that was nice mate really really nice Thanks. I spent quite some time on it. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
beatSTV 631 Posted February 18, 2013 the camera angles are brilliant, only comment was the survivor in the black is he supposed to be the same guy? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 18, 2013 the camera angles are brilliant, only comment was the survivor in the black is he supposed to be the same guy? Yeaaa.. sorry about that, the skins reset on every camera angle change, and I was too tired to notice I was filming the wrong one at most points.. Oh well, lesson learned. :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Twosheds 22 Posted February 18, 2013 yup, liked it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
victusmortuus 1074 Posted February 18, 2013 Really great man. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 18, 2013 Thanks for the nice feedback. Any improvements I could do? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BSB Jimmy 360 Posted February 18, 2013 please sponsor a bambi for just £2 a month Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 18, 2013 please sponsor a bambi for just £2 a monthI was tempted to do something like that :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ORiGiN Machinima 215 Posted February 18, 2013 Good effort.One critiscism, you've left a sloppy shot at 0:58 (Random fast zoom in).Apart from that Kudos to you! I assume you're using some form of sony vegas, in which case I'd like to point you towards using colour correction, it will really bring your videos to life. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 18, 2013 Good effort.One critiscism, you've left a sloppy shot at 0:58 (Random fast zoom in).Apart from that Kudos to you! I assume you're using some form of sony vegas, in which case I'd like to point you towards using colour correction, it will really bring your videos to life.I am trying to desature the vids a bit with CCorrection, it would give a bit more atmosphere. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
victusmortuus 1074 Posted February 18, 2013 Thanks for the nice feedback. Any improvements I could do?Longer scenarios.Devils Castle shootout.Stary Shootout.Car chase.Heli battle. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Argamore (DayZ) 110 Posted February 18, 2013 You got my ©cookies, because beans are too mainstream.NOTE: ©Cookies given from me are special and one-of-a-kind, even Rocket wanted my ©Cookies, true story.All rights reserved. ©Cookies are an official trademark of Argamore. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 19, 2013 Longer scenarios.Devils Castle shootout.Stary Shootout.Car chase.Heli battle.I'm still learning the tricks for making films with the stuff I do, but eventually all that will come to my videos . :) Thanks for nice feedback Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
privatewolf 59 Posted February 19, 2013 (edited) I hate high-grade military weapons abundantly laying about. Great video, keep up the great work! ;) Edited February 19, 2013 by WolfOneSix Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 19, 2013 (edited) You got my ©cookies, because beans are too mainstream.NOTE: ©Cookies given from me are special and one-of-a-kind, even Rocket wanted my ©Cookies, true story.All rights reserved. ©Cookies are an official trademark of Argamore.If this is true, I am truly honored. :D Edited February 19, 2013 by FortressDarkness Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Argamore (DayZ) 110 Posted February 19, 2013 If this is true, I am truly honored. :DThey sure are, scouts honor ! :DKeep the good work going, I'm not giving cookies for nothing, subscribed and shared the video. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 19, 2013 They sure are, scouts honor ! :DKeep the good work going, I'm not giving cookies for nothing, subscribed and shared the video.Thanks. I really need a bit of a kickstart from people, because getting yourself known in youtube is soo hard. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 19, 2013 I would love some more improvement ideas :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Argamore (DayZ) 110 Posted February 19, 2013 I would love some more improvement ideas :)It's hard to improve something that's already pretty good, ain't it ?I would love to see more of this, more actorss, and more bandit killings. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FortressDarkness 14 Posted February 20, 2013 It's hard to improve something that's already pretty good, ain't it ?I would love to see more of this, more actorss, and more bandit killings.Ah yes, bigger scenarios.. I'm hoping to expand on a huge scale on that part at some point.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
