I read the "encountering a zombie - what to do" post and you didn't really do a great job of it. The useful information was as such "Use a silenced weapon, have a good escape route, run around a building to get rid of them" the only thing out of those three that is useful is the building, oh and you suggested using a hatchet as a melee weapon due to duel functionality, so two pieces of useful information. The other things are self-evident, worth a mention but self evident. You didn't really tell me what I'd want to know, being a player with no experience (waiting for the standalone) what I want to know is the max number I should take on (with a melee weapon), how I should deal with them, what I have to be worried about like getting in a corner, zombies hearing and coming from behind and other things like that. I also want to know about anything that isnt obvious about escaping, e.g zombies don't slow down on hills (I had to re-read it to get this one, but make it three bits of useful info). It would also be nice if you cut down on the fluff when you're giving advice, the first paragraph for example, it's an introduction but why is it there? I'm new, I want as little information about other topics as possible so I can focus on understanding the advice you're giving me. I see what you're trying to do, and by all means insert all the personality you want in non-instructional posts but just try to keep it to a mininum for instructions. I just looked at another the "surviving your first day" post, it was good, though it was soured when I read a comment showing a faster way of looting and a warning about inventory, so your own inexperience with the game is showing. Overall nice effort and I'll be using these tips when I get the standalone.