thefishtickler 8 Posted November 17, 2014 Hi I have a made a cinematic intro for dayz sa series I am starting to edit. I thought I would share it here to get some feedback. Hopefully you get that the walls of society have fallen and the worlds no longer a safe place. So here it is ............ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qi_OaIJuBxc&feature=youtu.be Any feed back appreciated cheers :) :thumbsup: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cheeseburger8 80 Posted November 17, 2014 (edited) Well, my advice would be to: Make camera panning slower, and have it move around, ex: camera starts facing down on Cherno, have it start moving forward and start it facing upward, revealing more of the city. Also, make sure there's no down time between the switch to another shot, and it moving. ex: camera pans through NWAF, cuts to another shot, and camera stays there for 2 seconds, then moves. (make sure the two seconds DOESN'T happen). Show more people. :) Edited November 17, 2014 by Cheeseburger8 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
