traxxasthomas 4 Posted May 22, 2014 Hey Guys! can I maybe get some feedback on this video? Just what I might be able to o better and improve on? etc.. http://bit.ly/1pfNHuQ Thanks Guys! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Death By Crowbar 1213 Posted May 22, 2014 Watching you put the backpack in the backpack as you're talking is hilarious. "I don't even know what the hell I'm doing!" you said, lol. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
traxxasthomas 4 Posted May 22, 2014 (edited) Watching you put the backpack in the backpack as you're talking is hilarious. "I don't even know what the hell I'm doing!" you said, lol.HAHAHA, Thanks man! do have any ideas on things I can improve on? Edited May 22, 2014 by traxxasthomas 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xenology 61 Posted May 22, 2014 You have good audio quality :) Good start there you manage to stay engaging and entertaining instead of monotone you don't try to sound like you're trying too hard pretty funny as well a good thing to do is maybe having more people go with you in these vids to feature I think doing this with a more experienced player could definitely help expand your knowledge plus the viewers also another thing is maybe boosting your game volume i think it'd be cool to hear it better as you commentate but try to do it to where it doesn't drown you out. you're part of TGN already? Also cool maybe add videos like sidelines of trolling or messing around for laughs most people don't like watching long runs I don't mind too much but it'd be a good idea to edit some of the more strenuous parts out either way man it's a good vid I think you can make it far on YT as you improve in commentating! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cuwe 66 Posted May 22, 2014 Hey Guys! can I maybe get some feedback on this video? Just what I might be able to o better and improve on? etc.. http://bit.ly/1pfNHuQ Thanks Guys! Pretty cool vid.. If anything its cool to go back and watch yourself after and see where (if you did) you went wrong if you get capped. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Death By Crowbar 1213 Posted May 22, 2014 HAHAHA, Thanks man! do have any ideas on things I can improve on?Well, a couple of things on the video:You've got a couple of parts where the screen is blank and you're just talking. Fill in those parts with an image or something so people don't think the video is broken. Maybe add some suspense music/noise back in for fun in some parts (if you can).Game play thoughts:You seem to always manually grab items and put them into your inventory. To be quicker you can also simply double click them. I notice at one part in the hospital you grabbed the cereal but you missed an "empty icon" piece of loot next to it - that was probably a can of tuna. The red house with the stairs (has the piano downstairs) where you went upstairs and all 4 doors were locked - you missed the 5th door directly in the back, that's the main loot room in those houses. I think you were just turning too quickly and somehow didn't see it. When fighting zombies, don't just stand there and take a beating. Run around them in a circle while keeping a bead on them, you'll have to use your a and d keys more to strafe, but if you do that while hitting them at the same time you'll beat them up and they'll likely not even be able to hit you at all. If you only play daytime, the very first thing you should do after spawning is drop your flashlight and battery - save those 2 inventory slots if you're not playing night. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
traxxasthomas 4 Posted May 22, 2014 THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR YOUR FEEDBACK!!!!! I got a second episode coming out in a few hours to a day and it is greatly improved! thank you all again! I love this community! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gatorgutz 8 Posted May 22, 2014 lol just watched it,, i enjoyed the part in the piano house. the bandage and the upstairs door part. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
traxxasthomas 4 Posted May 22, 2014 lol just watched it,, i enjoyed the part in the piano house. the bandage and the upstairs door part.HAHA, Thanks Man! I hope in future episodes there are some entertaining things like that!!! I gotta say, this community is so much better then BF Or CoD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
