GlitchyV2 17 Posted August 4, 2013 (edited) A FEW THINGSOk, there are a few things i want to say before you read this :3I originally wrote the backstory as for my RP character in DayZRP, but i got blacklisted for not meeting the age requirement :( But, shit happens xDI got the idea to write a story when i was writing the backstory, as for some reason i enjoyed it...And i was also inspired by the story Past DayZ by dblxross (Great story, go check it out! http://tinyurl.com/PastDayZIf you want me to write more please comment as i WILL write if people want me to :)JACK'S BACKSTORYBorn and raised in Finland, Jack is your usual nordic survivor. He is endurable, quite tough and a very good shot,he was one of the best snipers in the Finnish Army (land forces branch of the Finnish Defence Forces).Jack was born on the second day of September in 1990, and was name after his grandfather. He had a normal childhood,except that he learned English at a very young age for a Finn from TV, movies and videogames. When he started schoolat the age of seven, he was quite a lot ahead of other students as he was very good at maths and such.At the age of 16 when he finished his comprehensive school he started studying in a career school to be a police,and he finished his studies at the age of 18, but didn't yet start on the job, he had to go to the army first.In the army he did well, because he was in good shape, the rough training wasn't much of a challenge to him,so he decided to stay in the army for 2 more years as a non-commissioned officer.Once he returned to his ordinary every day life, he wanted a vacation of everything,so he decided to go on a travel across the globe. He went to Britain, America and various other countries and met new friends there.When the infection hit, he was hunting in Russia, on the island of Taviana with some friends of his.They had been hunting for 2 days and they were going to leave after sleepingover the night but somehow a few of the zombies found them and attacked their camp.Unaware about the zombie apocalypse, they had no idea what was going on, and well, that didn't turn out too well...Jack got away from the zombies but his friends were killed.He was extremely angry at himself for letting his friends die, but at the same time horrified about an zombie apocalypse...He tried to call home, but nobody would answer, and he decided to head home no matter what. But without any kind of a vehicle,he was trapped in a wasteland full of zombies and bandits, so he had to abandon any hopes of getting back home...After that he has been surviving in the wasteland for a long time, in the hopes of a new start...CHAPTER 1 - LOW ON SUPPLIES1, 2, 3... 4 slugs, 1 loaded in the rifle, 3 in my pockets.2 cans of food, 1 water bottle, 1 can of Coca Cola...I carefully count my ammo, supplies and equipment."Damn it, i won't last long with these, i need to go out there and get some supplies..."I carefully take a look out of the windom in the barn, but i can't see anything as it is almost midnight.I haven't gone out in a while, not since my friends were killed...That day i ran for my life, i didn't help my friends, i was in a complete shock when i realised what i had done...I grabbed everything i found on the way, not caring about anything else than survival, MY survival!I squeeze my fist as hard as i can, i have to stop thinking about it, i have to let go!See, one thing i have learned about survival in this world gone to hell, the past is not a thing you should care about, otherwise you will become insane...Once i saw a few bandits outside of the barn, they executed one of their so called "comrades"... They just emptied their clips into the poor guy, luckily for me they ran away after that because of all the zombies that came because of the noise...I think i have been in this barn for 9 days now, and i have been trying to keep my thirst and hunger under control, but i have used my supplies up way too fast...I clear my mind and decide to get some sleep and go salvage everything from the town not too far away, i do not have a map so i cannot pinpoint my position, which makes moving around a lot harder...I have not seen any vehicles either, they are most likely in the custody of bandits...My eyes start to feel heavy, and i fall asleep...When i wake up the sun is already up high, i take a sip of water and eat what little is left of the can i opened yesterday morning... I grab my Winchester and my backpack, and slowly open the doors of the barn to check for any zombies. None of them are in sight, so i start moving fast in a crouched position and make my way to a small town. "1, 2, 3, 4, atleast 7 zombies roaming around, damn it, i'll have to be very quiet and sneaky..."I go prone and crawl my way to the nearest house that i can get into.I find a few empty cans of beans and soda, but nothing of use, so i move to the next house i can see...The door opens with ease, and no zombies are in sight so i get in, and walk slowly towards the kitchen, still crouched.I start opening the cabinets and i find a few cans of food and a bottle of water."Thank you thank you thank you"I have no idea who i'm talking to, but i am so happy that i don't even care!I don't find anything else of use, so i start moving to the next house.I quickly come to a spot where the road splits into two directions, to the right, leading to a station of some kind and to the left, leading to more houses. I'm thinking of going to the station, but suddenly i hear a gunshot from the left.As an reaction i instantly drop to the ground, roll to a bush on the side of the road, and ready my rifle.All i can think about is survival, it could be anyone...[end of chapter 1]CHAPTER 2 - DANGER AHEADI hold my position for a while, i don't move at all, concentrating on the road. I hear 3 more gunshots, then screams, sound of some one being killed...I get up after atleast five minutes of nothing else but the grunts and noises of the undead, and move to the other side of the road.I start slowly crawling towards the sounds, and once i see the situation, i regret my actions instantly.There was a man lying on the ground, dead, torn into pieces.I let this happen.For the next few minutes i think of what could have happened if i would have helped this guy, this poor, poor guy...I mentally slap myself as i promised not to think like this anymore, and concentrate on what is happening in front of me.Once the zombies finished their "business" with him, and had wandered off i slowly moved at the body.I know that in this wasteland you take what you can, so i dragged the body off the road and searched it.I felt disgusted at myself, but i took what little this guy had with him: a map of the island, a compass, a roadflare and some matches...For some reason the gun he had used wasn't anywhere to be found, but at the time i didn't think about it.I left the body and started moving at the houses that i yet had not searched. I went in the first one i could, and grabbed what i could find, the same with the other four houses too.I was already starting to get back to the barn, but then i remembered the station! There could be lots of stuff in there!I made my way back to the station's gate and tried to open it, but it would not budge! Climbing over it was not an option as it was too hard to climb and too high to get over, so i could not get in...I was flustrated by this, so i decided to get back to the barn, but what i saw was pretty much a surprise...The barn was on fire, with bandits around it! It seemed like they were looking for something around the barn, most likely because they didn't find it in the barn...Were those bandits i saw before some kind of traitors? Or were they looking for me?I didn't have too much time to think, because i saw some zombies coming out of the forest, heading towards the barn...I knew that things were going to go to hell very soon, so i went prone and hid in the tall grass. Not too long and i heard a few people yelling and the sound of cars driving away, i realize that i reacted just in time...I had no place to go, way too much stuff with me and bandits and zombies all around me!I had to find a safe place to stay, but first i had to stop, make a plan and check the bag i got... I hid in a bush on the edge of the town and opened the bag. I was surprised to find 3 bandages, some painkillers, morphine, 2 roadflares and a silenced M9 pistol!Unfortunately the was no ammo with the pistol, but i still took it with me...Next i took the map and looked at it."Fuck! I can't read Russian!"But even if i could not read it, i still could find my location in the map if i knew the towns name, so i started looking around for a roadsign, and i soon found it... I was in a small town called Kryvoe, but the map didn't help with the plan as it didn't show much details...I had no choice but to start following the road until i find another hideout, and that is going to be one dangerous journey...[end of chapter 2]CHAPTER 3 - A SAFE PLACE TO BEAfter about three hours of walking on the side of the road i was getting tired. I had passed a few towns because they seemed to be dangerous, full of zombies but i hadn't seen any shacks or barns or any kind of safe places...I stopped for a while to take a sip of water but i was cut short when i heard a loud explosion from the field on the other side of the forest.I didn't react like i usually would as i started running deeper into the forest, away from the sound.Somebody was apparently having some fun with explosives as i heard atleast 3 more explosions, but they were more and more distant every time...My ears were still ringing from before while i was running, so i didn't pay too much attention on anything else than getting away. I tripped on a tree branch, but luckily the ground was soft and i didn't get hurt and kept going.When i was completely out of breath and my legs hurt from all that running, i collapsed to the ground.I had to stop for a while to catch my breath, but i was still worried that someone was after me, and when i looked behind me, i was relieved because nobody was in sight.I slowly got up and started looking around...I didn't see much anything, so i decided to get to a higher position as it would be much easier to find a hideout from there...After a little bit of searching i found a hill that provided me a good vantage point.I started carefully scanning my surroundings, and the first thing that caught my attention was a quite large farm in the west. I decided to go check the farm out as i could find supplies and maybe even find a safe place to live in for a while...It was not a long trip, about 850 meters, and i was already on the edge of the forest. I could easily see the farm from there, but i wasn't going to rush to it before i knew it was safe!I started going around the house to check for dangers, but the only thing i found was a small pick-up truck that was obviously broken...It looked safe, but the house was too easily visible in the open, so i would have to find another place to stay at...Then i noticed a small shed on the edge of the forest, pretty much hidden but still visible! That would be almost perfect for a hideout, so i got really pumped about it, and i ran to it to check its condition.It was a basic wooden shed with metal sheets all over it, and it was in good condition, it looked almost untouched!I opened the door and stepped in, it was small, but large enough to fit me, my stuff and the various tools inside of it, and it was pretty clean on the inside too! It was basically a wooden box with metal sheets on it, but it was a good, safe place to be!But before i could make any decision i would need to search the house, as it could be full of zombies or bandits!I stepped out and readied my rifle, thinking about the possible dangers inside got me on my toes...I slowly went in through the basement, and was surprised to find out that the basement was not completely looted and still had stored food and such in it!I took what i could with me, as i could really use food and water...I found 4 cans of beans, 3 bottles of water and a cardboard box with a blood pack and a package of painkillers in it, but everything else was useless.My backpack was almost full, but i was able to fit the supplies in it.I opened the door to the first floor, and what was waiting for me was a huge mess; broken windows, broken furniture..."Jesus, looks like someone really left in a hurry..."I looked out of the window, it was getting darker, i had to be a little faster... I didn't find anything of use in the first floor so i got up to the second floor, just to find an even bigger mess! I searched the floor quickly, and found nothing of interest...I got out of the house, and went to the truck. I opened the drivers door, but the truck was empty, but the radio had been taken out of its place, and it looked like someone would have tried to take it with them...I tried to pull it out but its wires were still attached, so i had to somehow get them out in one piece if i wanted to get the radio working... The radio also seemed to have a microphone, but it was attached to the radio...One of the wires went to the roof, to an antenna, and luckily it could be easily twisted out, one down, one to go!The other one had to be attached to the car's battery so i opened the hood and took the battery out along with the wire that was used to power the radio, i took the radio, its battery and the antenna in my arms, if i would get this to work i might be able to get off this damned island!The car's bed was covered with a large camouflage cover. I got an idea to take the cover and put it on the shed for extra safety.When i got back to my new hideout it was already very dark, so i took some strong branches and set the cover up as quickly as possible. I got in the shed and dropped my stuff on the floor.I was tired from all the running and decided to get a good sleep.Using my backpack as a pillow and my rifle next to me i take a good position on the floor.When i closed my eyes i fell asleep almost instantly, not even thinking what is ahead of me tomorrow...[end of chapter 3]CHAPTER 4 - FRIENDLIES!?I got up full of energy, almost eager to start scavenging and traveling.I had the feeling you have when the day is going to be a good one, so of course i was pumped!The first thing i did was counting my supplies. I hadn't shot with my rifle at all, so i still had the ammo i had before.I opened my backpack and took out all of the stuff in it; six cans of food, four full water bottles, a can of cola, some matches, a blood pack, some painkillers and morphine.Suddenly i felt how empty my stomach was. When you don't think about food you often don't even realize how hungry you are.I open a can of food and eat it in under a minute. Then i open the can of cola and slowly empty its contents. I sigh of relief when i feel my stomach settling down."That hit the spot..."Then i remember the radio. I set it up as fast as i can in the hopes of finding help, people that could take me with them - not in a bodybag.I know that there are many groups of survivors out there, as i have seen them...I hook the radio onto the battery and turn it on, but surprise surprise, of course it doesn't work! I curse as loud as i can, and with my hopes crushed again i feel so pissed that i could tear someone apart. Three minutes ago i was going to happily go scavenging, but now i just feel bad. But i knew i had to go...I pack everything i have into my backpack, grab my rifle and get out, ready for anything.I step out of the shed and carefully look around me. I can't see nor hear any danger, so i walk out of the woods to the open. But that might have been a mistake.I heard a loud scream from the other side of the house. It was obviously a woman, so i rushed at the sound, my rifle readied. The next thing i heard was a gunshot.I took cover behind the truck next to the house, assuming that the shot was at me."Ok now... Get up, aim, fire..."I got up and took aim at the direction of the shot.But what i saw made my jaw drop...Two people, a man and a woman were desperately trying to get away from a zombie with a orange coat.The zombie was covered with blood and full of bullets, but it was still moving.The man and woman were trying to get away, but the woman seemed to be injured, so they could not stand a chance.Bandits or not this is not how anyone should end up.I took aim at the zombies head and pulled the trigger.It was clearly a straight hit, and the zombie dropped on the ground.The man and woman stopped the moment they heard the shot and started looking around.Suddenly the zombie got back up, and started running at me.'Think fast'... that is what i did,i flipped my gun over and hit the zombie in the face with the stock, knocking it out. Then i reloaded and shot it in the face... Twice.It was dead for sure this time.The man and woman didn't look like bandits, so i approached them slowly.The man had a pistol in his right hand."Drop the gun" i said, in a commanding tone."What?" the man asked.They were just standing there, staring at me."Drop it" i said again."No!" the man seemed afraid."Are you bandits?" i ask, as this was a thing that i was worried about!... The man didn't answer."Are you!?" i asked, i was getting pretty pissed.I grasped my gun harder."No, we're not!" the man was obviously afraid."Good, then drop the gun."I was happy to find survivors like me, but nowadays you can't really treat any one like a friend..."Ok.. But don't hurt us...""Don't worry, i'm not like that." i said, relieved about not having to use force.I walked towards them, with my rifle lowered onto my hip."Are you hurt?" i asked."I'm not, but Lucy has been shot..." i was kind of surprised to hear an english name."Ok, so she is Lucy... What is your..."The man took his pistol and aimed at me, and i reacted by rolling to the right. A bullet went flying past my head, but didn't hit. The man took aim at me again, but this time i already had my rifle on his head."Well, shit... Looks like we are stuck..."[end of chapter 4]CHAPTER 5 - TROUBLE"Well, let's see who breaks first..." i say, trying to be as intimitating as possible."S.. Stop it!"The woman... or Lucy is trying to stand up and is yelling at us to stop."Stop this now! You're just making it worse for all of us!" Lucy is desperately trying to make us stop."Fuck!" the man curses, lowering his weapon.The man drops his pistol and walks to Lucy."Good. Now who are you and what are you doing here?" i ask.For a moment there is just an awkward silence between us..."We're just looking for food and meds, don't kill us..." "I already said that i'm not like that...But why would you be here in the open? There are zombies and bandits around!""We need meds for her, she was shot...""By who?" i ask."We found a camp after our car broke down. The people at the camp seemed friendly at first, but they tried to rob us when were sleeping.We somehow managed to fight them off, but Lucy was shot when we tried to run. I did grab this gun from one of the guys...""So you ran from the camp and ended up here..." i feel bad for these people."Yes, we desperately need help!" Lucy says."I have some meds, let me look at that wound...""Really? And you would help us!?" the man asks."Of course! You two are the first friendly people i have seen in ages!" i reply."Great! Thank you!""Ok, now just lay on your back and let me look at that wound..."The gunshot wound had gone clean through, and even though it looked bad, it was just a minor wound."I'm no doctor, but this isn't as bad as it looks... The bullet has gone clean through, so i think a little water, a bandage and some painkillers should have you up and going in no time!"I flash a friendly smile and proceed to take one of my water bottles out."This might sting a little..."I pour some water onto the wound, and Lucy lets out a small yelp.Then i take the only bandage i have and wrap it around the wound."That should do it, now just take this painkiller and you should feel a lot better!"I hand over a pill and the water bottle, and she happily takes the pill.I take my water bottle and put it in my backpack.The man helps Lucy up."Thank you, i can stand up better now." Lucy says, thankfully."No problem!" i say, feeling good about helping her."What can we do to thank you?" The man asks."Well i never got your name..." i say in an asking tone."Oh, right, sorry for the earlier, you just can't trust anyone these days...My name is Matt! Nice to meet you!""It's ok, i understand... But to be honest Matt, you scared me shitless!""Hehe, well...""Wait what is that sound?" Lucy asks."Is that..?" "Oh shit, i think thats a car! To the forest, quick!" i command.We run to the forest as fast as possible, and the sound keeps getting louder and louder."Get down, we don't want any bandits to find us!""Are you sure they are bandits?" Matt asks."Who else could it be? It must be a group of bandits, they are everywhere!"The car comes visible from the other side of the hill. It's a military jeep with 4 people in it with rifles and bulletproof vests."What the... These don't look like bandits...""Maybe they are part of a faction or something?" Matt asks."I don't know, lets find out!" i say, with a strange urge.For some reason i want to find out who they are, maybe they have a camp or something that could help us survive!I hand Matt his pistol back, and tell him and Jane to run if something bad happens to me."What the hell mate?" Matt asks."I need to do this, they might be friendlies!"I don't know why i would even do this, but i get up and start walking towards the men, with my rifle lowered to my waist.As i walk towards them i get a little nervous.One of them notices me coming up the hill and yells somethig to his friends.They all take aim at me."Woah! I'm friendly, don't shoot!"A guy with a strong Russian accent is the first to reply."Don't move or you die!""Ok ok! Just don't shoot ok?" i say, trying to calm the men down."Who are you!?" the russian man asks."I'm just someone who tries to survive, i'm not a bandit or anything!"The men talk for a while and then respond: "Ok, come up here, but no sudden moves!""And keep that gun down!" one of them adds.I start walking up the hill slowly, my weapon on my waist.When i am about 10 meters away from them i stop and ask:"Who are you?" i ask."You don't need to know that!" one of the men says, this time with a more german accent."Ok... But why not?"Suddenly the fourth man yells at me:"Shut up and give us your stuff!""No! I need these, and besides i'm friendly!" i say, shocked about the sudden hostility."Then hand over your stuff!""No!""Fine! We will just rip them off of you!"The man takes a shot at me, but i barely manage to dodge it, and take cover behind their truck."Shit! This is bad, i need to take these guys out!"I roll into the open from the truck's back, and shoot one of the men twice. Once in the leg and once in his right hand.He drops his gun and screams in pain, i sprint to him and lift him up as a meat shield.The guy isn't very heavy, but not light either."This must be the dumbest idea ever!" i think to myself.I grab the guys AK and driven by adrenaline i drop the first two guys i see with clean headshots.The third guy is on the right side of the truck, so i move onto the front and aim at him."You fucker! You killed my comrades!""And you're next!" i yell, with a mad tone in my voice.We're aiming at each other, ready to fire. I have a shield, he does not.For a moment everything seems to stop.Then... BANG![end of chapter 5]CHAPTER 6 -NEW HOPE, NEW PLANThe russian man drops to the ground, lifeless. We fired our weapons at the same time, but he didn't hit me. But my meat shield, the person i'm holding as protection, has gone limp, and is bleeding a lot. I let go of him, and he falls on his back. He coughs some blood out, and dies. Seems like he got in in his chest by the russian guy..."Unlucky, he didn't have to die.." i thought.I heard footsteps behind me, it was Jane and Matt."Oh jesus!" Matt was clearly not aroused of the sight."This is the way the world is now, deal with it or die..." i don't know why i said this, it could be because i was angry or something..."Who were they?" Lucy asked, obviously grossed too."I'll check them for ID:s" i said.They all had the basic medical equipment, a bandage, some painkillers, antibiotics and morphine.I took them and stuffed all of it to my backpack. The russian guy had a drivers licence with him, and i picked it up to take a look."This guy was 27 years old, russian and his name was Berto Kowalski. Classy.""No tags or anything? They were in soldier uniforms..." Matt asked."Nope, could they be refugees or something? I mean... I think they could have been kicked out of a bandit group for stealing stuff..?""I don't know, and i don't think we should even care, as they attacked you!" Matt said."What's in the jeep?" Lucy asked out of the blue."Hmm, there could be something useful..." I walk up to the back of the truck and look to the bed.As a big surprise, there was a crate of explosives, most likely enough to blow a town up!"Holy shit, come take a look at this!" i shout.Lucy and Matt rush to take a look."Woah! Are you nuts? What if those things go boom?" Matt asks, clearly worried."They won't!" i say."Are you completely sure?" Lucy asks."Yes, i have experience on explosives, these will only blow up when triggered using a remote detonator.""Oh, good! Then we should be safe right?" Matt asks."I think so!" i say."Wait... Does the car run?" i ask from myself.I leap to the front, open the door and get in. The car seems to be completely fine, so i try to start it.It takes a moment, but the car starts up and runs beautifully."Well, where shall we go?" i ask.I flash a smile at Matt and Lucy."I heard about some places from the guys that tried to rob us before, there are supposed to be communities out there!" Matt says."I heard it too! They talked about some place called Haven..." Jane adds."Hmm, first we should find out where we are..."It takes a while, but we are finally able to pinpoint our location on the map."So, any ideas where these communities could be?" i ask, actually hoping for a location."We drove past a city, it had gone to hell..." Jane said with a sad tone in her voice."Let's get to a road before we choose anything!" Matt obviously just wanted to get out of there."Ok, hop in!" i say, completely ready to go."You are driving?" Matt asks."You can drive if you want to." i told Matt."No problem, i bet i'm a better driver than you anyways!" Matt says with a smirk on his face.I get out of the truck, give Matt the map and he gets to the drivers seat. Lucy hops onto the passenger seat and i sit onto the jeeps bed.Once we have been moving for a while i start thinking about a plan for the future."I might need to use these explosives, so i'll take a look at them..."[end of chapter 6]CHAPTER 7 - CREPITUS: THE GRAND FINALEI open the crate and take a look inside. It is packed with C-4 charges."These could be useful..."I close the crate and set it carefully to the left corner of the trucks bed.Then i lay on my back and close my eyes to think on a plan."I need to think of everything..."Some time later i've thought of almost every possible situation.I considered it necessary to plan ahead because before things had gone bad really fast."Uhh.. Jack?" "Yeah?""Which do you want to hear first, the bad news or the really bad ones?"I am a little surprised about Matt's question as everything seemed to be going well."What's wrong?" i ask."Well, it's getting dark... It is going to be harder to drive without lights, and if the lights are on, we will be an easy target for anyone...""Hmm... We need to act fast. What are the really bad news?" i ask."Well, it kind of fixes the first problem... We are running out of gas." Matt said."Oh shit, in that case we need to stop.""But where? We can't just stay on the road..." Lucy says."Let's drive into the forest, we can get some cover for a camp there." i say, as i had planned for this to happen too.Matt pulls to the woods and drives deeper and deeper in. When we have driven for a good 15 minutes i tell Matt to stop."We should be far from the road now, let's stop and setup a camp."Matt stops the car and he and Lucy get out. Meanwhile i open the C-4 crate and get one of the detonators.I get out of the car and check out the surroundings. "We should be safe here. Let's find some branches and stuff to make a campfire." i say.Once we have made a campfire i tell Lucy and Matt to get some rest."What about you?" Lucy asks."I'll be on guard.""Ok, be sure to wake us up if something happens." Matt says, already half asleep.Some time passes, and everything goes well until i hear something coming our way."Engines, oh fuck!"The sounds keep getting louder and louder, so i wake Matt and Lucy."There is someone coming, grab my backpack and run!"Matt and Lucy take the backpack and run deeper into the forest without saying anything."I have a feeling this will not end well."The cars quickly stop right next to our camp, and two people get out. "Who are you?" i ask."We are from the same group this truck of yours used to belong to, we are looking for two captives that escaped from us and shot one of our men.""So you are not looking for some one who killed four of your groups men?""We don't know about anything like that, this truck was stolen from us.""We only want to know about the captives." the other man said"One of our men spotted you with them, you will either tell us where they went peacefully, or we can use force too.""I think i know who you are looking for, but they are long gone." i say with a smirk on my face."Don't fuck with us!" the other guy kicks me in the jaw, damn that hurt."We'll only say it one more time, we are looking for two captives that escaped from us and shot one of our men. You tell us where they went and you can live to see a new day.""Fuck... you.."The only thing they realized was that i put my right hand into my pocket.On the split second i pressed on the detonator i thought: Going out with a bang, never expected that to happen.[end of Survivor Diary #1: Jack Hunter's Story] Edited September 14, 2013 by GlitchyV2 4 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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callsignBravo (DayZ) 323 Posted August 10, 2013 i like it the cliffhanger at the end of chapter 4 was good! i also like the backstory added, it gives depth not just a guy with a name running around with a gun 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GlitchyV2 17 Posted August 10, 2013 i like it the cliffhanger at the end of chapter 4 was good! i also like the backstory added, it gives depth not just a guy with a name running around with a gunThank you! :3I originally wrote the backstory for the whitelist application for DayZRP, but hot blacklisted for being underage xDSo, i just decided to write a story :P 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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NikosVolaras 3 Posted September 14, 2013 O.M.G It is freaking awesome PLLLLEASSSSEEE Continue it. I love it!!!!! Is there a way that i can learn when u post something? 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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GlitchyV2 17 Posted September 14, 2013 Chapters 6 & 7 added!Story finished, will write more of these later on! :D 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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NikosVolaras 3 Posted September 16, 2013 did the explosives killed everyone or were they ruined and didnt explode when he pressed the detonator Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GlitchyV2 17 Posted September 16, 2013 Well that might be revealed in a future diary ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dragsy 0 Posted December 17, 2013 Well that might be revealed in a future diary ;)Glitchy I saw you on the Stories of the Survivors thread, and saw you had one of these, so i tried to get to it and my connection went bad, so I fixed it and read this and it was very very satisfying and worth it. This is an amazing amazing story and I really hope you keep doing these, come to think of it I always think of these stories when I have nothing to do, so I might do my own. Once again AMAZING job and keep up the good work!!!!!!! -Dragsy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites