The dayz story I am writing

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

Hi everybody I started to wright a day storry. I got a little bit of a start for it but I will expand it allot. I have allot of good Ideas. I will post a start here and keep updating more on my web page http://www.deepbonegaming.enjin.com Sorry for grammar mistakes if I made any. Please comment what you think about it. It will really help me to progress. So here it is

The life in the wasteland

My name is Jonathan Wenston and I am leaving this journal in case I don’t live to see the next day and someone finds me. I want to leave my experience and knowledge to the future survivors of this horror. I know that this virus is not going to go away because it can be compared to a forest fire in the desert where there is no water to extinguish it. It has been 4 years since I ended up in the epicenter of the new plague. But this plague is not just a disease that spreads. This plague has a body, and the body thinks and acts. I am talking about nothing else but the infected ‘’Zombies’’. They are not real zombies because they live and breathe. And the people that are still not infected are the rare case of humans that are immune to the virus, and I am one of them. So for us is only one thing that the virus can do. Well not really the virus, it’s the infected. Their sole purpose now is to just kill any survivor and feed on the corpse. Now it’s time for me to tell everything from the beginning.

It all started four years ago. I was a rookie reporter sent to Chernarus to investigate the new virus that started spreading in the area. If only I knew what awaits me I would have never taken the task. We were arriving in a helicopter to the Balota airfield when something hit it, it was nothing else but the infected themselves. I looked at the tail of the little news helicopter and I saw three infected clinging on it. And the pilot made a fatal mistake for him who was having his window open because in a blink of the eye one of the infected leaped from the hangar and grabbed him through the little window on the chopper. The helicopter started spinning out of control but thank god we were close enough to the group for me to jump for my life. So I opened the door and jumped. I hit the ground hard but was still able to make a run for it in the woods. As I was running the only thing I heard that still haunts me in my dreams was the pilots scream and an explosion.

After running for a while I stopped in the woods for a rest. All I had on me was my little backpack with nothing more than a flashlight a water bottle and a couple of sandwiches. I was wearing hiking clothes so I had some useful stuff in my pockets like a knife and a compass. But I knew that will not be enough for me to survive. So I pulled out the map that I was given when coming here. I knew that I was at Balot airfield and when I looked at the map I noticed that there was a small town of Komarovo to the west of Balota. I could of just went to the town in Balota but after that noise the helicopter made I did not want to risk it. So I checked my compass and started walking. It took me about half an hour to get to Komarovo. As I approached it I noticed that there was allot of military wrecks everywhere. I walked up to a banged up UAZ and checked inside. I found a pair of binoculars and a can of beans. I figured that it will be the best source of food in this place. As I continued to approach Komarovo I went up on a hill north of it and checked the area around it. I knew there will be Infected all over the place. The main thing I was looking for is survivors. I got warned before coming here that there are allot of bandits now. They will rob and kill you in a flash. As it looked clear I started moving towards the town. I approached some old building and noticed a hatchet in a stump most likely for wood cutting. I took it with me because it was at least a weapon of some sort. As I searched building after building I started gathering supplies like canned food and drink. Also I found some matches which will be useful latter on and some road flares. As I was searching a house I heard footsteps but they were not footsteps from the infected. They sounded human. The infected make dragging noise when they walk. And how about I call the Infected ''Zeds'' It will make it more easy for me to wright it. When I head the footsteps I froze for a minute and then started peaking through the window. It was a young boy not older than fifteen. He was running for his life from the Zeds. I quickly yelled '' In here I'm friendly''. He did not hesitate for a second and ran towards the building with two Zeds trailing him. I got ready to swing my hatchet at the Zeds. As he ran in I yelled ''Get down now''. He dropped to the ground and as the Zeds were running in I swung and took one of their head clean off but I had a problem. My hatched got stuck in the doorway and I could not pull it out. Thank god the kid quickly got up and shoulder smashed into the Zed that was about to get me. So I had time to pull out the hatchet and hit the Zed on the head.

Edited February 11, 2013 by Cyberdog

[Sakka 28]

Great work man. It was a good story, just needs more description about the actual events. Such as your first zed kill. How did change you, had johnathan ever killed anyone before? Also I would change up the part where you say Balota 3 times in I think 2 sentences. Try something like...

"There was a small community positioned just southwest of the airfield. After all the commotion I decided to just get the hell out of there moving further west to next closest town. Checking the map I read the name Komarovo."

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

Jonathan is a main character and he is telling the story. I will get to those parts in the next updates. Keep updated on my web page ;) Thanks for the comment

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

bump

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

Bump

[b683960 3]

http://www.deepbonegaming.enjin.com

I get this "There was a problem, please contact support."

To the story: sorry but you are not a potential candidate for the next Nobel Prize for Literature.

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

I never said I am. I am doing my best of making a interesting dayz story

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

And as the web page if you look at the link something is wrong with it there is a . at the end. Remove it

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

Bump

[BwobBwub 660]

It was good and has a lot of potential. I think you could put more detail into the story. It seems to go to quick.

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

Will do. Thanks for the comment

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

bump

[H0tSh0t_JTF 13]

Hi everybody I started to wright a day storry. I got a little bit of a start for it but I will expand it allot. I have allot of good Ideas. I will post a start here and keep updating more on my web page http://www.deepbonegaming.enjin.com Sorry for grammar mistakes if I made any. Please comment what you think about it. It will really help me to progress. So here it is

The life in the wasteland

My name is Jonathan Wenston and I am leaving this journal in case I don’t live to see the next day and someone finds me. I want to leave my experience and knowledge to the future survivors of this horror. I know that this virus is not going to go away because it can be compared to a forest fire in the desert where there is no water to extinguish it. It has been 4 years since I ended up in the epicenter of the new plague. But this plague is not just a disease that spreads. This plague has a body, and the body thinks and acts. I am talking about nothing else but the infected ‘’Zombies’’. They are not real zombies because they live and breathe. And the people that are still not infected are the rare case of humans that are immune to the virus, and I am one of them. So for us is only one thing that the virus can do. Well not really the virus, it’s the infected. Their sole purpose now is to just kill any survivor and feed on the corpse. Now it’s time for me to tell everything from the beginning.

It all started four years ago. I was a rookie reporter sent to Chernarus to investigate the new virus that started spreading in the area. If only I knew what awaits me I would have never taken the task. We were arriving in a helicopter to the Balota airfield when something hit it, it was nothing else but the infected themselves. I looked at the tail of the little news helicopter and I saw three infected clinging on it. And the pilot made a fatal mistake for him who was having his window open because in a blink of the eye one of the infected leaped from the hangar and grabbed him through the little window on the chopper. The helicopter started spinning out of control but thank god we were close enough to the group for me to jump for my life. So I opened the door and jumped. I hit the ground hard but was still able to make a run for it in the woods. As I was running the only thing I heard that still haunts me in my dreams was the pilots scream and an explosion.

After running for a while I stopped in the woods for a rest. All I had on me was my little backpack with nothing more than a flashlight a water bottle and a couple of sandwiches. I was wearing hiking clothes so I had some useful stuff in my pockets like a knife and a compass. But I knew that will not be enough for me to survive. So I pulled out the map that I was given when coming here. I knew that I was at Balot airfield and when I looked at the map I noticed that there was a small town of Komarovo to the west of Balota. I could of just went to the town in Balota but after that noise the helicopter made I did not want to risk it. So I checked my compass and started walking. It took me about half an hour to get to Komarovo. As I approached it I noticed that there was allot of military wrecks everywhere. I walked up to a banged up UAZ and checked inside. I found a pair of binoculars and a can of beans. I figured that it will be the best source of food in this place. As I continued to approach Komarovo I went up on a hill north of it and checked the area around it. I knew there will be Infected all over the place. The main thing I was looking for is survivors. I got warned before coming here that there are allot of bandits now. They will rob and kill you in a flash. As it looked clear I started moving towards the town. I approached some old building and noticed a hatchet in a stump most likely for wood cutting. I took it with me because it was at least a weapon of some sort. As I searched building after building I started gathering supplies like canned food and drink. Also I found some matches which will be useful latter on and some road flares. As I was searching a house I heard footsteps but they were not footsteps from the infected. They sounded human. The infected make dragging noise when they walk. And how about I call the Infected ''Zeds'' It will make it more easy for me to wright it. When I head the footsteps I froze for a minute and then started peaking through the window. It was a young boy not older than fifteen. He was running for his life from the Zeds. I quickly yelled '' In here I'm friendly''. He did not hesitate for a second and ran towards the building with two Zeds trailing him. I got ready to swing my hatchet at the Zeds. As he ran in I yelled ''Get down now''. He dropped to the ground and as the Zeds were running in I swung and took one of their head clean off but I had a problem. My hatched got stuck in the doorway and I could not pull it out. Thank god the kid quickly got up and shoulder smashed into the Zed that was about to get me. So I had time to pull out the hatchet and hit the Zed on the head.

That sounds epic dude!!

[Cyberdog (DayZ) 8]

Thanks man

[Powell (DayZ) 734]

stop bumping your thread so much

if no one is interested, let it die