"Chernogorsk" A DayZ poem I worte :D (Sorry if the name is taken)

[JimTheNinja 2]

This is a short little poem (not so short) that I got bored and wrote in the middle of study hall at school. Constructive criticism is appreciated!

As I spawn on the shore once more

I realize that I must fight an internal war

Bandit or Hero I must digress

Will I hurt people or hurt people less

I start my run to the city of Cherno

A place that seems like a hellish inferno

I loot what I can grabbing supplies

But all to often I hear those flies

Once in a while a shot will ring out

I see more death and I start to shout

"To hell with these bandits, pain no more"

"One by one they shall all hit the floor"

I run the the station and search for a gun

When I look out and see a man on the run

He holds a hatchet and an ALICE pack

I see some arrows sticking out of his back

I stop and stare thinking if I can help

But he takes a shot to the head and dies with a yelp

I feel nervous and start to run

Forgetting to even grab myself a gun

I run to the market hoping for luck

When I hear a shout saying "you better duck"

I hit the deck as bullets fly by

But the man who saved me takes one to his eye

He falls down dead with flies by his head

And I begin to feel a feeling of dread

I take his Lee enfield and put on his ALICE pack

This is when I plan my final attack

One of them run in through the front door

The last thing he sees is me on the floor

His friend gets nervous I hear it in his voice

Then he makes a fatal, life taking choice

He runs inside to get vengance for his friend

But I was waiting with my rifle and hit him with its end

He hits the floor and I kick his gun away

I snapped his legs so he can't run away

I hear him beg for his life that he is truley sorry

And that he just wanted his friend to go to Starry

"I have no pitty for bandits like you"

"You raid, you kill, you make nightmares come true"

I relod my rifle and get ready to take the shot

But I decide not to I feel I should not

I say "begone with you bandit and your fellow scum"

"Never return and go cry to your mom"

He runs of terrified as I sent him away

Then I decide that I can no longer stay

I head for the hills leaving Cherno with glee

"Chernogorsk you fool you shall never take me"

I'm just about home free when a shot from behind

Hits my head and I know this is my time

I fall to floor and I fill with dread

Because my screen now says

"You are dead"

[gloopsgf 35]

Great poem, would make a good DayZ song xD

[gamerman001 182]

You win a manly poem award

CONGRATULATIONS!

[xx_fr0st-w0lf_xx 53]

was expecting garbage, this was quite good.

[JimTheNinja 2]

Thanks guys :)

Edited February 4, 2013 by JimTheNinja

[JimTheNinja 2]

Got some nice reviews on this :D

[Dagwood 680]

More productive use of time than I ever made in study hall...

[Hetstaine 10852]

 Nice, forever and never a bandit  :thumbsup:  :beans:

[JimTheNinja 2]

More productive use of time than I ever made in study hall...

Thats exactly where i made it xD