Liquid Snake 11 Posted January 28, 2013 I was playing on one of my favorite servers "Doorman is God" Scavenging for parts too fix up a 3rd vehicle with my friend, Mike. we asked over side chat if any one would like to make a trade. we were going to trade a green car with lightning bolt decals on it which we called "The shit car" for 4 wheels and some engine parts. I went a head to the meeting place which was a farm field west of Zelenogorsk. I waited there watching mike un armed driving the shit car about 10 mph across the field. The people we were trading with arrived first I was watching tem through my binocs with my FAL at my side ready to shoot if something went wrong. over the Skype call I heard mike say "What do you mean you don't have the wheels?" instantly I put my binocs down and pulled my FAL in hand as soon as Mike said "the deals off" an m107 round hit him in the back of the head. one of the men ran into the shat car and thought he could get away but luckily the shit car wasn't very fast I shot out the wheels on out car as well as their betty van And shot the drives that's 2 kills. I waited for a whole 10 minutes for the sniper to show himself but he never did I switched to my M14 and ran to the farm buildings to the west I cleared them and entered the woods to the south of the field and I spotted 2 players laying prone next to each other one with an m24 the other with the 50.cal I took my time recovered my breath hoping the wouldn't see me and shot the 50 cal sniper in the head the other man didn't react very well I shot him once in the leg but managed to get behind a tree but as he stood to bandage his head bent to the other side of tree allowing me to shoot him It was satisfying because as he bent down I heard him yell "NO NO NO WAIT" well then I shot him over and over again. Mike had just shown up thanks to a bicycle near his spawn but just as he got off his bike an AKM shot him in the back I ran for cover and waited. I saw him run to the betty van grab an m16 out of it an start running to his buddies body I shot him in the chest 4 times and he was down. I met up with Mike and we collected our loot and went back to base. Which was raided that night. Good times (: 11 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xepherus 10 Posted January 28, 2013 Great story! Lots of drama, as it should be.May I suggest using more punctuation? It'll help your story get across to the reader better. 4 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pyro_Marine 147 Posted January 28, 2013 Noted for reading later when I get off work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xen0saur 2 Posted January 30, 2013 Good story, but a little more punctuation would have made it a great one. You haz my beans. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dylanco1 10 Posted February 3, 2013 Now What the other guy did was proper Banditry if you go on and Piss about with things like that where the's real betrayal and you can make a story instead of "I shot him him him him him him him AAAANND all of those guys" *Massive graveyard shows mostly newspawns in the graves*. Its what I thought of in DayZ instead of *Guy with car has cleared out Elektro of loot* "Dude dont shoot I have nothing" *Tries to kill me and succeeds only to get massacred because he didnt plan ahead when using that Shiny AKM or M16(Acog)-GL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
