My New DayZ Rap Song! "May Not Survive" Listen, Share, Subscribe.

[devilsnight 26]

Lyrics in the video. Would love your feedback!

Edited November 12, 2012 by devilsnight

[narsil1 24]

Nice music, lyrics are not bad either.

Usually don't like rap, but this is pretty good.

Some video covering the song would be awesome.

[devilsnight 26]

Thanks narsil!

[devilsnight 26]

Any feedback guys?

[Spazeruu 2]

I don't play DayZ and I don't listen to music much these days. I did used to listen to some hip-hop and yeah I really liked the song.

[zscope 282]

Needs to be longer so you can do that chrous thing you did at the end at least 2 or 3 times....plus it's an awesome song, only part I don't like is the pause between 1:38 and 1:58...that's 20 seconds of you not rapping...I wanna hear you rapping the whole time!!!!!!

[Josh225 129]

It was already said but a video edit or something to go with it would be killer

[radley_bear 0]

Was expecting something I would laugh at, I was wrong. This is badass man! A female sung chorus would be pretty cool.

Edited November 12, 2012 by radley_bear

[devilsnight 26]

Thanks everyone! That pause was in the beat and originally I had breathing in there but it sounded more awkward lol.

[devilsnight 26]

Where else is a good place to share this?

[devilsnight 26]

bump?

[morgan32 403]

The WarZ forums, MAKE DEM RAGE.

[TheLibrarian 71]

I enjoyed this. Thank you. There were some parts that in my opinion needed some more emphasis, but in general... goosebumps. Those motherfuckers got jason.

Edited November 22, 2012 by Cody_Lundin