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Ive added you on steam. Hope to talk soon.

I don't want to tease you guys too much....but what I can say- expect chapter 11, as well as 12, fairly soon.

Constructive criticism is very appreciated, as it helps me develop into a better writer. I agree with you, Alex's character has always felt less like a genuine person and more like somebody that the reader could project themselves onto. I agree that he should have his own unique personality, and intend to develop this as time passes. Also, there is a high possibility that as Alex embraces the harsh world that is DayZ, he will become more of a bandit and lose himself. While this isn't befitting of a protagonist, I believe that is what happens to the majority of us who play the game and is what probably would happen if it was for real. Realistic and intriguing plot lines are always my favorite when it comes to a survival story. I'm glad you like it, and I'm even more pleased that it has inspired someone else to write! Just remember that despite what others tell you, you can always, always improve and get better through practice. Reading doesn't hurt either.

Yeah, I agree with you. Its just that the format seems to die every time I update the thread, so I've just stopped trying XD EDIT: I broke it up into paragraphs back to the way it originally was. It should be a lot easier to read, now.

Thanks. I have been getting that a lot, actually. However, I still don't think my skills are on par with an author's. Hopefully after this year in AP english my skills will be!

Sorry, took a bit of a break from the story. I was away, in another state for around a month. Should be more soon, but no promises, just showing you guys im not dead. I still have big plans for the story, and even for the main characters to eventually end up in Chernarus! I have a nice little outline set up. Will write with it as soon as I get the time.

Argh, almost done with chapter 11. Like I said, lots been going on. Expect more this summer when Im in Missouri.

I was banned from the TS3 whilst chatting to another member. I have no idea why, but it really puts a big detriment on how I felt about the community. Seems the owners may be a bit prone to impulsive decisions. Anyways, it was fun while it lasted, I suppose. Invest time here at your own risk.

Curse dat biology for 11 being late.

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I live on the west coast of the US, so that is Pacific time, or GMT -7.

In-Game Name: Dblxross (Prefered nick is "Dbl") Age: 16 Youtube Channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/DblxrossProductions Why I would like to join: I've been planning a DayZ series for the last couple months, but can never get enough people interested in DayZ, or the various mod-in-a-mods for it. (E.G Origins). My usual friends have been in-active as of late, and I am looking for some new people to play with. I'm pretty experienced and have been playing DayZ since the summer of 2012. I remember when lingor, the first ported map, came out :). I'm pretty good at the game of ArmA II itself and play a lot of ACE and ACRE (realism mods). I can think on my feet, but I fool around enough to make my videos pretty entertaining. I look forward to a response. -Dbl

been working on chapter 11.

Argh, the format killed itself. Gonna have to fix this when I write the next chapter...

Aaaand chapter 10 is up!

It will be great. I lost my notebook that had all the chapters I have been working on, so now I have to start from scratch....

Thanks alot for the good feedback, but I am honestly very busy doing things around my home and other IRL things. I keep forgetting to post it in my free time and I'm sorry. I will post it as soon as possible, but I can honestly say it will be no sooner than this weekend, as that is when all the stuff I've been preparing for will blow over.

No worries guys, I haven't abandoned this story, just had some stuff going on IRL. I will try and post chapter 10 tomorrow, but no promises as I've had one helluva week.

I have chapter 10 ready to be up, but I am waiting. Aka, im lazy.

Wow, thanks for posting that on there, but I don't think there is much of a possibility of rocket choosing my story to put into the game :P thanks anyways though.

Chapter 10 is mostly ready, waiting until tomorrow to post it though.

Chapter 9 is up! its mainly a builder for chapter 10. You guys will all get an answer to your questions about chapter five soon enough. (hint-hint)

Good to hear! Chapter nine should be here by this friday, maybe sooner!

Messed around on Origins and came up with a few...interesting...ideas.