VeryGamer256

Thanks!

Oh please, if you don't like it and hate it without even reading it who are you to say that no one deserves to read it. This was my first post and this is the type of feedback I get? The community as of now seems to be full of incompetent idiots who don't take the time to read before commenting. You seem so attached to the post considering you don't stop commenting about your opinion that lacks anything from the actual post other than my mistake about paragraphs, you're a pathetic little rat who loves criticism over simple things. Go bicker somewhere else where your thoughts are appreciated you oversized, malnutritious, ass-face! Oh and work on your channel and stop wasting your time, jackass.

I'm guessing it was "Inferno"? I've read it, it's not a bad book.

I'm not writing a book here woah kiddo, it's a post about my experience in DayZ. Why would you want to read it again?

So all in all, 1 mistake leads to your assumption that something is uninteresting? You know that famous Scientists, authors, etc. Have made mistakes, in the end their writing or whatever was interesting. Maybe if you took the time to actually read something than to jump to conclusions, you might hate or like it. "Never judge a book by it's cover" you've heard that one haven't you? I do not advocate your way of judging things because of a simple flaw. You'd make a horrible teacher, I could imagine you holding up your student's paper and saying "No this, automatically a fail, restart". Help yourself please. The one question that comes to my mind is, why are you the way you are?

Oh and I saw your YouTube channel, 19 subscribers? Didn't watch. My channel is GasMask Metabasis. I'm going to take a nap, give me tap on the back once your subs catch up to me!

You didn't have to comment that, you could've just ignored it and not written anything but I get it, a story with a literary mistake is too good for you. It's alright I'm sorry I couldn't live up to your simple expectation. For that I promise to do better in my illiterate life. I failed you...

Of course paragraphs are not grammar however grammar Nazis are known to correct spelling and other literary mistakes. Ever heard the quote "No one likes a smart-ass?". I wrote this whole story and the only thing you commented was about my mistake in making a paragraph. Just giving you a heads up. When I saw that someone commented on my post I was happy, then I found out it was some dolt trying to point out a flaw in my writing to make themselves look like an intelligent person for pointing out the obvious. Thanks for commenting though!

That's awesome man! I've never killed someone with a long horn.

Yeah I feel the same way. When I see a geared player and they start shooting at me, it's not like COD or the usual FPS where you just run up to the guy and blast him, you have to think the situation through, take cover etc. Sometimes shootouts are intense to the point where I'm scared and sweating lol. Thanks for the feedback and I'm going to to start recording these moments. :D

Wow I kinda forgot about paragraphs lol. Guess I was too focused on bringing my story to the forums. Oh and next time try to comment about things relevant to the post and not a grammar Nazi lesson, thanks!

Here's my story. My friends and I Nick and Josh are in Cherno doing our usual patrol. We're all really geared so we try to look for some action. We go inside the church to set up a plan on where to go and vice versa. We decide to skim and patrol the shore of Cherno next to the church. Josh sees this one guy and mistakes his axe for a gun and panics. He shoots the guy in the legs. I tell him to hold his fire and run up to wounded guy to patch him up. He says just end it and that he lost a lot of blood so I apologize and proceed to shoot him. We huddle back at the church to eat up and what not. Then we go to the back of the courtyard of the church and look over the walls. Josh and Nick saw 3 guys one dead and 2 that most likely killed the other. Nick shoots one of them in the arm and Josh kills the other. I run up to the guy who was shot in the arm and I patch him up. We interrogate the guy and ask about the dead body. He tells us that he and his buddy killed him. My clan being heroes despite our name which is "GAS Bandits" I'm going to change it lol. Anyway we gun the guy down Pulp-Fiction style and go back to the church. On our way back I start hearing rounds being fired and muffled chatter. I tell Nick and Josh to position themselves around the area just incase the mysterious group comes our way. I manage to see one guy presumably the leader walking down the street coming our direction I don't hesitate and I unload 15 bullets from my AKM with 75rnd mag onto the poor bastard. He manages to call for help which made my heart sink. We hold our positions for about 1 min. All of a sudden Nick starts yelling "There's 10 guys coming!" I freeze not knowing what to do. I was thinking about holding our positions a bit longer. I then decide to just run to cover considering they could easily flank us. Josh and I run into the grocery store with the gap in the wall. Unfortunately for Nick he gets gunned down trying to come to us. Pure silence seeps in after Nick dies. Josh and I are inside a small grocery store with 10 or more armed guys outside. Luckily they didn't see us go inside the building which I used as an advantage for one kill. As the hostiles outside desperately try to look for us one of the idiots peer through the gap and I easily take him out with a head shot. His buddies now know where we are. However locals around Cherno hear the shots and swarm around the area these fresh spawns act as an "unintentional distraction" as the assailants start spraying at them which gives me time to take out 2. Then 2 more fresh spawns come into the building. I tell them to leave. 1 starts looting the bodies, I give him one more warning but he doesn't listen so I shoot him. I then tell the other fresh spawn to get down he doesn't listen and tries to run away I had to shoot him. Under these circumstances it was basically KOS or die. It was a war zone in Cherno. 2 mins pass by then 3 guys come into the store Josh shoots 1 I shoot another and the last one gets away to the nearby building. Nick runs from Electro to Cherno. As he is about to come inside he sees that the guy who got away is trying to ghost inside. Nick knocks the guy out and kills him. Josh then gets shot. I quickly stand up from the counter and this guy says in a confident voice "Guys I got me!" Then all of a sudden I fucking feed this guy lead. Josh makes it back to Cherno and we all get geared up again. This was one of my most intense battles ever in DayZ SA. There was more to it but I'll leave out the small details.