onkyponk

hey guys ! a few weeks ago i came to these forums for some help , i got a few replys and today i have come back for some more feedback. I have tried to follow the advice i got and overall make my videos nicer to look at , snappy shorter and more entertaining. Hope fully you guys can take a quick look at my videos and see how i did. Feedback really helps me positive or constructive criticism please just take a few minutes to have a quick browse of my channel and leave a response either here or on youtube ! Link: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCzeySFPyONX_okYB5y1zhWw

Thanks ! i've only been doing this for about 2 weeks so im defiantly still learning

Thanks , thats a good idea , Sorry about the link i'm not a very frequent poster on these forums !

I'm defiantly not asking for a sub or likes or whatever i just want some constructive feedback on my videos , most of which are about dayz. I've only really been making and uploading videos consistently for like a week and a half now so i'm defiantly very new. Anyway i hope you enjoy them :beans: Here's my channel : https://www.youtube.com/user/onkyponk3

id love to play with some people, im 15 , english and live in england i have teamspeak and skype , feel free to add me on steam : ONKYPONK